书面表达专练(四) 衔接升级专练
A
[题目要求]
(2016·辽宁省部分重点高中协作校模拟)假定你是李华，你的美国网友Jack喜欢网络交友，因而忽略了现实中的友情，请你用英文给他发一封电子邮件，劝他回到现实。要点如下：
1．网络交友的坏处；
2．真实友情的重要性。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语和结束语已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack，
I’m sorry to hear that you are too addicted to makingfriends online.-----------------------------
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Yours，
Li Hua
升级加黑的衔接词并添加衔接词
Dear Jack，
I’m sorry to hear that you are too addicted to makingfriends online. Now, many teenagers likemaking friends online. ①________________ (结果), they often neglect the friendship in real life.This has aroused social concern and I think it’s unreasonable.
②________________ (众所周知), net friends aren’t always worthtrusting. Firstly, they often talk with us in the name of a good person,but the truth is quite the contrary. Secondly,making friends online will cost us much time and money, causing us not to focusour attention on study. Lastly, we getalong with our real friends more often than net friends. They can study and playtogether with us. ③________________ (更重要的是), they always give us a hand when we are in trouble.
In a word, making friends online isn’t a good idea. So pleasecome back to reality.
Yours，
Li Hua
[我来提升] 将文中加黑的衔接词升级
1．Now→ ________________
2．Firstly→ ________________
3．Secondly→ ________________
4．Lastly→ ________________
5．In a word→ ________________
[积累练习] 将下列衔接词进行升级
1．then→ ________________
2．sometimes→ ________________
3．suddenly→ ________________
4．immediately→ ________________
5．in fact→ ________________
6．in my opinion→ ________________
B
[题目要求]
(2016·长春实验中学模拟)汽车走进了普通家庭，现在越来越多的人选择开车出行，但这也带来了不少问题。请你用英语为某一学生报社写封信，内容包括：
1．开车出行的好处；
2．开车出行带来的问题；
3．你的观点和建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam，
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
升级加黑的衔接词并添加衔接词
Dear Sir/Madam，
①________________ (随着……的发展) economy, more and more families own cars, which makes the life easier, quicker and moreconvenient. Besides, it can save thema lot of time. So this is why so manypeople prefer to drive cars when going out. But just as every coin has two sides, the popularity of driving carsresults in many problems. For example, toomany cars can cause traffic problems. ②________________ (更糟的是), air pollution is becoming worseand worse.
③________________ (就我个人而言), as a useful traffic tool, carsshould be used occasionally. ④________________ (如果可能的话), we can take public transport orgo out by bike or on foot.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
[我来提升] 将文中加黑的衔接词升级
1．Besides→ ________________
2．So→ ________________
3．But→ ________________
4．For example→ ________________
[积累练习] 将下列衔接词进行升级
1．in my view→ ________________
2．because of→ ________________
3．because→ ________________
4．as soon as→ ________________
5．if→ ________________
6．although→ ________________
C
[题目要求]
(2016·青岛市58中模拟)假如你是某中学的学生李华。前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括：
1．付出才有回报；
2．收获自信和友谊；
3．感激之情。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Looking back to the National English Speaking CompetitionI took part in several days ago, I have a lot to share with you.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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下面考生作文中行文混乱、不分段，个别语句颠倒，并缺少衔接词，请加以改正
[考生作文]
Looking back to the National English Speaking CompetitionI took part in several days ago, I have a lot to share with you. I am very gladthat I’ve won the first prize in the competition and I am proud of myself. I’veestablished friendship and it developed my self-confidence. I owe my success tomy teachers and judges. They have helped me a lot. From the competition I have understoodthe meaning of the proverb “No pains, no gains”. I owe my success to my workinghard. I have made friends with students from all over our country. I have learneda lot from them. The experience is very important to us. I will always treasurethis meaningful and memorable experience. I expect to achieve more success.
[改后作文]
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D
[题目要求]
(2016·保定市模拟)假设你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Daniel今年燕山大学毕业，他非常喜欢秦皇岛这个城市，正在纠结毕业后回国还是留在秦皇岛，他给你写信寻求建议，请你根据下面的提示给他回信。
1．建议留下；
2．留下的好处(环境美，优惠政策等)；
3．美好祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
3．开头语和结束语已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Daniel，
I’m very glad to hear from you. From your letter I know-------------------------------------------
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Yours，
Li Hua
下面考生作文中行文混乱、不分段，个别语句颠倒，并缺少衔接词，请加以改正
[考生作文]
Dear Daniel，
I’m very glad to hear from you. From your letter I know you are wondering whether to go back homelandor stay at
Yours，
Li Hua
[改后作文]
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书面表达专练(四) 衔接升级专练
A
①As a result/As a consequence ②As we all know/As is knownto all ③More importantly
我来提升
1．Nowadays/At present 2.To begin with/To start with/Fora start 3.In addition/What’s more 4.Last but not least
5．In conclusion/In summary/To sum up
积累练习
1．after that/afterwards 2.occasionally/once in a while/fromtime to time 3.all of a sudden 4.in a flash 5.as a matter of fact
6．as far as I am concerned
B
①With the development of ②What’s worse/To make mattersworse/Worse still
③Personaly/In my opinion/As far asI’m concerned ④If possible
我来提升
1．In addition/What’s more/Moreover
2．Therefore 3.However 4.For instance
积累练习
1．in my point of view 2.on account of/due to/owing to/thanksto 3.in that 4.the moment/immediately/on (upon)＋动名词
5．providing/provided/supposing/suppose/oncondition that 6.despite/in spite of
C
改后作文
Lookingback to the National English Speaking Competition I took part in several days ago,I have a lot to share with you.
Firstly, I feel really delighted that I’ve won the firstprize in the competition, which makes me understand the true meaning of the proverb “No pains, no gains”. Besides, I’ve establishedthe friendship with students from all over our country, from whom I’ve learned alot. More importantly, taking this competition has enabled me to overcome my fearof speaking in public, thus developing my self-confidence. Additionally, I owe many thanksto my teachers and judges, without whosehelp, I couldn’t have done such an excellent job.
Tosum up, I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experience.
D
改后作文
DearDaniel，
I’mvery glad to hear from you. From your letter I know you are wondering whether to go back homelandor stay at
Personallyspeaking, I’d like you to stay. For one reason,
Ihope my suggestions will be of some help to you. May you have good luck and a brightfuture.
Yours，
Li Hua